Yar, so my first idea that I actually handed in (there were SEVERAL before) wasn't rejected, but hadned back with the "PT factor". That would be a reference to Patrick Taylor(one of the worst playwrights in 15-ish years...). Aparently my play was heading towards that direction. Mrs. C. said it would make a great short story or a screne play or something, but it was not stage worthy. I had too many character, that plot was hard to follow, and it would be far too complicated to put into a half hour play(20-ish pages). So I changed it a bit: got rid of 4 character(there were 9), changed the plot a bit, etc. However, I was foiled agian! So I deci